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Monday, October 12, 2015
Dairy to Kaikoura
Dear dairy Today I am going on a ferry to kaikoura to go hunting for deer ,rabbits,duck. we'll need to go up in to the mountains we I got there I saw a deer the deer was tremendously big. It was very fun but I wish I stayed there longer.
I like the diary entry you have done Cody & using the word tremendously that is a tremendously big word you have used top work Cody AAA+++.
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Great story Cody! I agree with your dad you have done great using the word tremendously twice in your story. Keep up all that hard work!
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Hi I really like seeing your story's on here :)
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Dad
Hi I really like seeing your story's on here :)
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