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Wednesday, September 17, 2014
The Fugitive has Escaped!
Check the end of the video to discover who is the Fugitive?
This writing activity motivated students to write about a famous fugitive that has escaped and the students are the police informing the public of the description of the fugitive.
I bet you enjoyed being a police man Cody as this is something that has always interested you. I liked how you used your favourite things in the story like the skate park and slide. Well done Cody
I bet you enjoyed being a police man Cody as this is something that has always interested you. I liked how you used your favourite things in the story like the skate park and slide. Well done Cody
ReplyDeleteGreat story Cody. You look fantastic with curly blonde hair. Love the hat as well. I hope you will write another story I can read.
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