Sunday, August 10, 2014

The Accident

This is writing activity helps the student to sequence their writing. The comic strip is used as a motivation to write his/story…  This is cody''s interpretation of the pictures





 One day I going to the shop to get chocolate cake with mum, dad and my sister.
 I saw an ugly old man with a mental stick . He was crossing the road.
 The ugly old man stepped onto the road in front of a car.
 Suddenly the car hit the brakes. The old man said watch where you are going !
Then a tow truck came out of no where. Next there were flames and smoke everywhere!

The old man said that was bad driving.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 10, 2014 at 6:03 PM

    Cody the story is written in a logical manner. There is excellent use of using exclamation marks to add excitement rather than a full stop.

    Both of us have to focus on you using the dictionary to solve essential words. As discuss with your parents this is a writing goal of your.

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  2. UnknownAugust 31, 2014 at 3:33 PM

    Great story writing Cody, so pleased the old man was ok.
    We will keep up with the spelling of the essential words at home.
    Great work

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